Thursday, January 20, 2011

Blog Entry #2.21 - Greeting Card 3 Reject (B,D)


This greeting card is for Muslim Men. This design is less atrractive because it is dull and the picture do not explain anything.This design could be improved by changing the picture and the designing.

Blog Entry #2.20 - Greeting Card 3 (B,D)

This greeting card is for Muslim Men. The elements of the card would attract the consumers attention because it looks like a dream and it si very bright. This original sketch is similar to the this but this one looks better. The changes that were made was the light effects and font.

Blog Entry #2.19 - Greeting Card 2 Reject (B,D)

This greeting card is for Muslim Women. This desing is less appealing to the consumers attention because they wouldnt know if the greeting card is for women or men. one improvement to this would me if I had more pictures to show that it is for women.

Blog #2.18 - Greeting Card 2 (B,D)


This greeting card is for Muslim Women. The elements of the greeting card can attract the consumers attention because the picture literally tells what the consumer is. This is similar to my original sketch but its better than the original sketch.

Blog Entry #2.17 - Greeting Card 1 Reject (B,D)

The consumer for this greeting card is Muslim Children. This design is less appealing to this children because probably the children don't even know what is henna, and its alot of words on the card. I think that it would have been better if it was more creative.

Blog Entry #2.16 - Greeting Card 1 (B,D)


This card is for Muslim children.The elements of the art that will attract the consumers attention is that there is less words for the kid to read, and that it is very colorful.The final design is more better and more visible than the original sketch. The changes that were made were the colors of the font, the size of the font, and the font.

Tuesday, January 11, 2011

Blog Entry #2.15 - Process Journal 4 (E)

I have completed and designed 4 greeting cards for 3 consumers but i only have 2 for the Muslim children, and 1 for Muslim women, and 1 for Muslim men. I think that i need to finish designing my cards and i would be finish. I need to concentrate more on my work.

Blog Entry #2.13 - Process Journal 3 (E)

I have completed the designing and writing part of my greeting cards. I think the part that needs to be fixed is the designing part and being able to finish all my work during the classwork time. I can improve this problem that needs to be fixed by concentrating on my work more during our class time.

Tuesday, January 4, 2011

Blog Entry #2.11- Process Journal 2 (E)

The steps that i think I completed so far is the quotes and how to organize my card. I can make an improvement on designing my card.I think that I deserve a 7 in the class because I talk and laugh a lot in the class while doing my work but I always do my work. I can improve my score by being more concentrated into my work then with my communication towards others.

Blog Entry #2.10- Target Consumers (E)

Target Consumer #1- The first and second greeting cards is for Muslim men who can speak Arabic. This specifically for Muslim who speak Arabic because it is written in Arabic. Only the people that understand will read it. I put Muslim men praying and a picture of mecca for this target consumer because it will attract the readers attention.
Target Consumer #2- The third and fourth greeting cards is for Muslim women. I put the third and fourth one for women because it talks about family and mothers. The pictures shows women praying.
Target Consumer #3- The fifth and sixth greeting cards is for Muslim Children. I kept it short and simple for them to understand. I made it creative and colorful also for them to understand.